I admit I was tempted much earlier in the story to write a few paragraphs from Ed's POV ^^ But I got adviced from someone who´s option I value very much that it could ruin things and I shouldn't change a concept that's working. After thinking about that, I have to agree with her :D I`m very fond of the Roy-perspective here and I hope the readers are feeling with him. That means, they don´t get much more information than Roy does ^^ A bit is fine, but a insight into Ed's thoughts really could ruin it ._. Right now, Roy is thinking about Ed a lot. He´s intrigued and I hope, the readers are as well ^^ Can´t say for sure, however.
It will become more clear however, what Ed is aiming for :D he won´t be able to stay calm and controlled forever, it´s Ed after all ^^ though, he does take great care with this... hm... situation?
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After thinking about that, I have to agree with her :D I`m very fond of the Roy-perspective here and I hope the readers are feeling with him. That means, they don´t get much more information than Roy does ^^ A bit is fine, but a insight into Ed's thoughts really could ruin it ._. Right now, Roy is thinking about Ed a lot. He´s intrigued and I hope, the readers are as well ^^
Can´t say for sure, however.
It will become more clear however, what Ed is aiming for :D he won´t be able to stay calm and controlled forever, it´s Ed after all ^^ though, he does take great care with this... hm... situation?